black is as dark as the night,
white is as light as the day,
blue is as refreshing as the ocean,
orange is as beautiful as the sunset,
purple is as plump as the plum,
yellow is as bright as the sun,
green is as soft as the grass,
gray is as gleaming as the metal,
red is as vicious as the blood...
the meaning: the world started off a dark place with no life or meaning. then came life, a single piece of hope in the evolving world. slowly, some new things started to come besides just plain things. life came a it was the most amazing thing in the world. animals and people started growing, becoming more full of themselves. life was good, supplying the world with what it need. then came over use and new pollution. the world started developing worries instead of positive additions. and the world will become the dark age again unless we change it...
I really loved teh idea of writing about the colors of teh world an dthen comparing tehm to something. The thing that really was great was the explanation. Most everybody doesn't have one so I thought that was really great too. Just try adding some figgurative language. Otherwise loved it!!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing....seemed very interesting to me, and it really stood out to me when I read it. The explanation was gratifying. Nice job!
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