Hate is a Strong Word.
It is addressed to enemies,
Not to family members or dear friends.
It is a dangerous word,
Breaking the hearts of some and the thoughts of others.
It is brought out by the dark of people,
The conscious of the mind in perplexing times.
It is fruitless to say,
There is no gain in saying it, only loss.
It is a sin to use,
An inhumane word for the most dirtiest of people.
Hate is a Strong Word.
It is addressed to enemies,
Not to family members or dear friends.
It is a dangerous word,
Breaking the hearts of some and the thoughts of others.
It is brought out by the dark of people,
The conscious of the mind in perplexing times.
It is fruitless to say,
There is no gain in saying it, only loss.
It is a sin to use,
An inhumane word for the most dirtiest of people.
Hate is a Strong Word.
Ishan, this is a very descriptive poem. I really love the wording and your picture too. I also like how you said hate is a "dangerous" word. As always, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you when you said that hate was a strong word. I feel like it is an important topic that not many people regard. I also really liked your vocabulary and your word choice and format was really nice. Great job.
ReplyDeleteNice format, good structure, good vocabulary, and the wording are all factors that make this poem unique, Ishan!
ReplyDeleteSimran has a nice comment here! I also would like to add to everyone else's comments and give some feedback! I'd extend a little more on the pain and feelings connected to hate. or touch deeper on one of the ideas you posed. Nice work
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice everyone! I will use your advice for upcoming poems. This will assist in making my poem the best it can be. Thanks again!
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